Sample Answer for Mark Scheme

Paper 2 Question 7:

Question 7a

• AO1 – Select and synthesise evidence from different texts

Level 3 (5-6 marks)

The response demonstrates a detailed synthesis of evidence, with a clear understanding of the similarities between the two texts. The evidence is well-chosen, and the response makes relevant comparisons that show insight into the relationship between the texts.

Level 2 (3-4 marks)

The response provides a clear synthesis of evidence, with some valid references to both texts. The similarities are identified but may not be fully developed or thoroughly explored. Some comparisons may be underexplained.

Level 1 (1-2 marks)

The response offers a limited synthesis of evidence, with minimal reference to both texts. The similarities may be mentioned but not fully explained, and the comparison is somewhat superficial.

Level 0 (0 marks)

No rewardable material. No valid response was provided.

• AO3: Compare writers' ideas and perspectives, as well as how these are conveyed, across two or more texts

Question 7b

• AO3: Compare writers' ideas and perspectives, as well as how these are conveyed, across two or more texts

Level 5 (12-14 marks)

Comprehensive and sophisticated comparison

The response demonstrates a comprehensive understanding of how ideas and perspectives are presented in both texts. There is a detailed analysis of the methods used to convey the writers' perspectives, with clear, relevant examples that are fully explored.

Level 4 (9-11 marks)

Well-developed comparison

The response offers a strong comparison of ideas and perspectives, with clear examples from both texts. The analysis is well-developed, though some sections may not be fully explored.

Level 3 (6-8 marks)

Clear comparison

The response makes clear comparisons between the texts, identifying key similarities and differences. Some ideas may be underdeveloped, and the connections between the texts could be explored in greater depth.

Level 2 (3-5 marks)

Basic comparison

The response identifies some comparisons but may lack clarity or depth. The analysis of how ideas and perspectives are conveyed may be superficial.

Level 1 (1-2 marks)

Limited comparison

The response makes a basic comparison with minimal detail. The ideas and perspectives are identified but not fully explored.

Level 0 (0 marks)

No rewardable material

No valid response was provided.