Themes (OCR A-Level English Literature): Revision Notes
Themes
Shakespeare's Coriolanus explores several interconnected themes that reveal the complex relationship between personal identity, family bonds, and political life in ancient Rome. These themes help us understand the tragic downfall of the protagonist and the tensions within Roman society.
Family as the foundation of the Republic
The play presents family relationships as fundamental to the strength and stability of the Roman state. Shakespeare weaves together personal and political through the language of family, showing how domestic bonds mirror and support the republic's structure.
Volumnia's influence on Coriolanus
The most significant family relationship in the play is between Coriolanus and his mother, Volumnia. She has raised her son to embody military values, training him from childhood to seek glory in battle. Her approach to motherhood is entirely shaped by her dedication to Rome's strength.
When Virgilia, her daughter-in-law, expresses concern about Coriolanus's safety in battle, Volumnia responds with shocking clarity about her priorities. She declares that even if she had twelve equally beloved sons, she would rather see eleven die honourably in combat than have one live comfortably without military achievement. This statement reveals how deeply her maternal love is intertwined with patriotic duty.
Volumnia's control over her son proves decisive at key moments in the play. She uses her maternal authority to manipulate Coriolanus's decisions, first pressuring him to pursue political office despite his reluctance, and later convincing him to abandon his vengeful attack on Rome. Her influence demonstrates how family bonds can be leveraged in service of the state, even when this causes personal conflict.
Menenius as a father figure
The patrician Menenius extends the family metaphor to explain Rome's political structure. In the opening scene, he attempts to calm angry citizens by describing the patricians as fathers to the plebeians, who are like children in this imagined family. This metaphor serves a political purpose—it suggests that social hierarchy is natural and that the common people should trust their patrician "parents" to make decisions for them.
Menenius also adopts a paternal role towards Coriolanus himself, offering guidance as he navigates political challenges. Later, when Coriolanus has turned against Rome, Menenius approaches him using the language of fatherhood, attempting to reawaken his sense of filial duty. He appeals directly to their bond:
The glorious gods sit in hourly synod about thy particular prosperity and love thee no worse than thy old father Menenius does! O my son, my son!
However, this paternal relationship ultimately fails. Coriolanus dismisses Menenius coldly, showing that the family metaphor cannot repair a fundamentally broken political relationship. This moment reveals the limits of using familial language to maintain political allegiance when genuine bonds have been severed.
The ambiguous power of speech
One of the play's central concerns is how language functions in political life, and how speaking can both empower and destroy those who use it unwisely.
The double meaning of voice
The Dual Meaning of "Voice"
Shakespeare exploits the dual meaning of the word "voice" in Elizabethan English. Whilst today we primarily understand "voice" as the sound we produce when speaking, in Shakespeare's time it also meant a formal expression of choice—what we would now call a vote. This double meaning becomes crucial to the play's political drama.
The connection between these two meanings reflects Rome's recent transformation from monarchy to republic. In this new system, citizens have political "voices"—the right to vote—which makes speech and persuasion newly important. The action centres on Coriolanus's candidacy for consul, which requires him to seek the plebeians' votes.
Although the common people initially grant him their voices, the tribune Brutus warns them that Coriolanus, once in power, will reduce them to having no more voice than dogs. Here, Brutus suggests that Coriolanus will silence their political participation entirely, stripping them of both speech and voting rights.
Coriolanus's failure with political speech
The play subjects Coriolanus's speech to intense scrutiny. His fellow patricians advise him to address the plebeians with grace and refinement, using the sophisticated rhetoric expected of politicians. However, Coriolanus fundamentally rejects this form of communication. He excels at inspiring soldiers during battle with fierce, direct language, but finds the elaborate, flattering speech of peacetime politics dishonest and objectionable.
This discomfort leads Coriolanus to speak with transparent disdain for the common people, making his contempt obvious. The more politically astute tribunes exploit this transparency, manipulating the citizens by pointing out how clearly Coriolanus despises them.
Menenius defends Coriolanus by arguing that he cannot "speak 'em fair" because he is "ill schooled in bolted language"—essentially claiming that Coriolanus lacks training in refined political speech. Yet this defence fails. Coriolanus's inability to control his speech has unpredictable consequences, ultimately leading to his banishment from Rome. The theme demonstrates how speech in politics is double-edged, capable of backfiring in unexpected ways.
The inauthenticity of political theatre
Shakespeare uses theatrical metaphors throughout the play to present politics as a form of performance, highlighting the contrast between authentic identity and the roles politicians must adopt.
Coriolanus's resistance to performance
Coriolanus has been shaped by his mother to be a warrior, and he feels most genuine when surrounded by fellow soldiers. The senate, by contrast, is alien territory where success depends on words rather than actions, and social grace matters more than physical strength. Because his identity is so firmly rooted in military life, the refined manners required by politics strike Coriolanus as fundamentally fake. He hates the idea of performing a role that conflicts with his true self.
When his fellow patricians ask him to don a toga and appear humbly before the common people, Coriolanus resists with all his being. Eventually, he yields to pressure, but his performance is disastrous because he cannot hide his true feelings.
As he states with bitter honesty, he can only perform the role of "the man I am"—meaning he cannot pretend to be someone he is not. This inability to separate his authentic self from his political role proves fatal to his career.
Expert political performers
Whilst Coriolanus lacks the skill to succeed in political theatre, other characters are masterful performers who thrive in the public arena. The tribunes Brutus and Sicinius demonstrate exceptional talent for political deception.
Example: The Tribunes' Manipulation
When citizens express doubts about voting for a man who openly despises them, the tribunes encourage them to revoke their votes. Cleverly, they instruct the citizens to blame this reversal on the tribunes themselves, claiming the tribunes told them to vote for Coriolanus initially. This allows the tribunes to appear supportive of Coriolanus to the patricians whilst secretly orchestrating his downfall.
After successfully engineering Coriolanus's banishment, the tribunes recognise they must adjust their performance to maintain good relations with the patricians. As Brutus advises:
Let us seem humbler after it is done / Than when it was a-doing.
This calculated display of false modesty shows their sophisticated understanding of political theatre.
Later in the play, Tullus Aufidius proves equally skilled at performance. He pretends to support Coriolanus whilst secretly growing resentful and plotting his assassination. These characters succeed in politics precisely because they can separate their true feelings from their public performances—an ability Coriolanus entirely lacks.
Key quotations for revision
Essential Quotations to Remember:
- "I had rather had eleven die nobly for their country than one voluptuously surfeit out of action" (1.3.25–27) - Volumnia's extreme patriotic values
- "for you like fathers" (1.1.79) - Menenius describing patricians' relationship to plebeians
- "make them of no more voice / Than dogs" (2.3.239–40) - Brutus warning about tyranny
- "ill schooled / In bolted language" (3.1.409–410) - Menenius defending Coriolanus's poor speech
- "play[ing] / The man I am" (3.2.17–18) - Coriolanus's inability to perform roles
Exam tips
Strategies for Success:
- Link themes together: These themes are interconnected—family influences political behaviour, speech affects political success, and performance is required in politics
- Use specific examples: Reference particular scenes where these themes appear, such as Volumnia's manipulation or the voting scenes
- Consider character contrasts: Compare Coriolanus's inability to perform with the tribunes' skill at political theatre
- Explore ambiguity: Shakespeare doesn't present simple answers—consider multiple perspectives on whether political performance is necessary or corrupt
Remember!
Key Points to Remember:
- Family relationships in the play mirror and support Rome's political structure, with Volumnia's maternal control serving republican interests
- The word "voice" means both speech and vote, highlighting how political power depends on effective rhetoric
- Coriolanus fails in politics because he cannot control his speech or hide his contempt for common people
- Politics in the play is theatrical performance, requiring actors to separate authentic identity from public roles
- Skilled politicians like the tribunes and Aufidius thrive by mastering deception, whilst Coriolanus can only "play the man I am"